State of New Jersey, Department of Education

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Language Arts Literacy

Writing

New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric (Modified For ESPA) - p. 23
In Scoring, consider the grid of  written 
language
Inadequate Command Limited Command Partial Command Adequate Command Strong Command
Score 1 2 3 4 5
Content & Organization
  • May lack opening and/or closing
  • May lack opening and/or closing
  • May lack opening and/or closing
  • Generally has opening and/ or closing
  • Opening and closing
  • .
  • Minimal response to topic; uncertain focus
  • Attempts to focus
  • May drift or shift focus
  • Usually has single focus
  • Single focus
  • Single focus
  • Sense of unity and coherence
  • Key ideas developed
  • .
  • No planning evident: disorganized
  • Attempts organization
  • Few, if any, transactions between ideas
  • Some lapses or flaws in organization
  • May lack some transactions between ideas
  • Ideas loosely connected
  • Transition evident
  • Logical progression of ideas
  • Moderately fluent
  • Attempts compositional risks
  • .
  • Details random, inappropriate, or barely apparent
  • Details lack elaboration, i.e., highlight paper
  • Repetitious details
  • Several unelaborated details
  • Uneven development of details
  • Details appropriate and varied
  • Usage
  • No apparent control
  • Severe/numerous errors
  • Numerous errors
  • Errors/ patterns of errors may be evident
  • Some errors that do not interfere with meaning
  • Few errors
  • Sentence Construction
  • Assortment of incomplete and/or incorrect sentences
  • Excessive monotony/same structure
  • Numerous errors
  • Little variety in syntax
  • Some errors
  • Some variety
  • Generally correct
  • Variety in syntax appropriate and effective 
  • Few errors
  • Mechanics
  • Errors so severe they detract from meaning
  • Numerous serious errors
  • Patterns of errors evident
  • No consistent pattern of errors
  • Some errors that do not interfere with meaning
  • Few errors
  • Content & Organization
    Usage
    Sentence Construction
    Mechanics
  • Communicates intended message to intended audience
  • Relates to topic
  • Opening and closing
  • Focused
  • Logical progression of ideas
  • Transitions
  • Appropriate details and information
  • Tense formation
  • Subject-verb agreement
  • Pronouns usage/agreement
  • Word choice/meaning
  • Proper modifiers
  • Variety of type, structure, and length
  • Correct construction
  • Spelling
  • Capitalization
  • Punctuation