New Jersey GEPA Language Arts Literacy Assessment Tutorial
Cluster 2: Writing to Persuade - Prompt "A"
Writing Sample #1 - Scoring "4"
The following writing sample for the Sample Persuasive Writing Prompt A scored a "4" based on the New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric.
Scorers made the following comments about the sample below:
This response is focused with an opening, a closing and some elaboration of ideas. The writer proposes a solution to the breakfast issue in the essay, (...everyday in homeroom serve a bagel and maybe small juice). There is a progression of ideas, but minimal development and elaboration of ides keep this response at the adequate command.
