New Jersey GEPA Language Arts Literacy Assessment Tutorial
Cluster 2: Writing to Persuade - Prompt "B"
Writing Sample #1 - Scoring "1"
The following writing sample for the Sample Persuasive Writing Prompt B scored a "1" based on the New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric.
Scorers made the following comments about the sample below:
The writer attempts to take a position, (The ban that you want to start will make kids at school very angry). However, there is minimal elaboration of ideas and supporting details. Overall, an inadequate command of language is demonstrated.
