Cluster 2: Writing to Persuade - Prompt "C"
Writing Sample #5 - Scoring "3"
The following writing sample for the Sample Persuasive Writing Prompt C scored a "3" based on the New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric.
Scorers made the following comments about the sample below:
This response focuses on the topic, and ideas are presented with sufficient development. However, the flaws in organziation keep this paper at the partial command of language.
